Aside from a lot of grammar errors it's a really good game. Occasionally when reading the dialogue you get things like this "I stood there wavering. Whatever I choice I made, it would hurt him." and this is a small example, there were a few times I couldn't tell what was being said, the meaning I mean. These aren't throughout the entire game however so it's still a really good game. I do wish several depressing scenes, certain deaths did not happen though.