Marysha Abel

The outline had super good potential, especially giving the relevance of the theme; however, the cheesy essence was hard to stomach. Also, there were never any over exciting moments. It also was like everything was rushed and not fully explained. And some of the factors were unrealistic; like (spoiler alert) how did they manage to instal a sanitizer slot in every home? How did a garbage truck driver be appointed head of sanitation, which in turn is basically in charge of detaining anyone he seems fit. Also, how can a face scan over a phone tell if you’re sick. Like, come on people. If they’d focused less on exaggerating those factors, and maybe focused more on how the government is wrong and corrupt in how they’re displaying the virus and handling lockdowns, it would have given better realistic standpoints which would have cut out the cheesy factors.