Ashley Scheidel

The story is interesting but I chose to stop reading it for 2 reasons. 1) I feel it’s unnecessary to point out a characters skin color in excess the way he did. Relating a child’s attitude, attire, and voice to their skin color. 2) the way he talks about children’s bodies sexually. These are children 15 yrs or younger. I don’t feel it’s appropriate to talk about a teenagers chest, hips, sexuality. Or to imply that a child is being molested. I don’t feel it relates to the story.