Evan DaSilva

Found the main character Bobby to be a boring two-dimensional archetype. Bobby is a 14 year old boy who excels at everything, and is then taken to be the savior of Duenduron. The story is told through a set of five journals that Bobby writes to his friends (also two dimensional archetypes) during his adventure, but it feels as though Bobby is aware that he is writing young adult fiction, which would have been an interesting twist. The plot was cool, and some of the other characters were interesting, but the delivery was wanting.