Mirna Falcone Barone

The book is interesting but I find your books are repetitive and should only be a 1 book not 2

It was very interesting, although, there are some parts where you elaborate too much on details that are not needed, there are pages when she remembers time with her mother, not needed. between the time she arrives to her aunt, there are pages of nonsense. then to find out in the end that there is another book. i find authors today always seem to need another book to end their story. when in reality it could be done in one book. my opinion

this book is more along the lines that the imperfect love should have been written. lets be realistic, who leaves everything behind on those words which he supposedly spoke in that recording. she couldnt tell. also it was a dead give away, she was calling with the mothers phone, she never questioned this or called the hospital to be sure.. they didnt even have a conversation. you would not have needed to write all the if books, when writing your 3 original books, it should have been detailed in those books. i find many chapters were repetitive .