The concept is good for a web series. It makes me watch the entire series in a go on a Friday night. But what I felt was the screenplay and acting didn't do justice for the story.
The police who investigates is a drunkard, mentally disturbed due to personal loss and that personal loss is also not written well. A girl of around 10 doesn't know a pistol? why shud she pull the trigger facing the gun towards her, it's illogical and unbelievable. They could have shown it as if the gun accidentally killed her but instead she plays with the gun and pulls the trigger calm and cool with the gun facing towards her. And how he finds the connection between the murder victims is also not written well
The father instead of killing the donors for his son to move up the list he could have approached the tribunal to move up his sons rank in the list as the others above in the list are all very old against his son a 6 year old boy. He murders them very easily and escapes from the murder without any single mistake or evidence that too without any criminal background for him is not what I expected. How he gets the list of donors and recipients is also very blunt, he jus gets into the hospital, into doctors room , checks the drawer and gets the list just like that and no one cares about him wandering in a private hospital late night.
All the mistakes aside it's a good binge watch on a weekend.