keith glyn davies

The characters are not developed. I found myself wondering who certain people were a third of the way through the book The art of writing whimsy is put to good use but overall the book has no underlying plot that drives it forward - no tension “ poetry is to dancing as narrative is to walking” the latter must constantly take you forward: it must have a purpose Sue there are the deaths but I found it all rather disjointed and you can notice two thirds into the book that the author is getting rather fed up with the business of writing