Bella Taylor

SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A lot of the things the characters did made no sense. like why did they not tell Amy who the other spy was? it would have been way less stressful for Amy and a lot less mistakes would be made. Also the order of the Wicked did a horrible job of preparing Amy. They barley taught her anything and then put her in such a dangerous place. But I guess her not knowing anything would make her take risks which is what happened. I did like the fact that Ozma was Pete although it was predictable, they were one of the characters I liked. And the word "materialized" why did you use it so much like twice in one paragraph, stop overusing that word. This is more a critique on the characters and what they do not the story but I mean the characters didn't write the story so.