Claudia Vercellotti

This has a great message and a lot of potential, right up until the writing fell flat. In no order: 1. Who leaves with 3 able bodied kids, a man to do the work of so many? It would have been far more interesting to make the cleanup a group effort with vinnettes of the “secret” interspersed. 2. It wreaks of white male savior. 3. The sheer volume and logistics of storm cleanup was too much for one person. 4. No way would miranda have ruined her kids birthday with a scene....she just got done saying how one turns 16 only once. 4. The kids and miranda would have stayed and helped if you’re consistent with their character. 5. The food scene at grandmas, their protest of her food would be inconsistent with their characters and miranda’s tolerance for their ungrateful nature wouldn’t Have been tolerated. 5. The toothache scene seems inconsistent with mirandas perfect teeth. 6. The transitions in and out between miranda and bray seemed forced. 7. Miranda and Bray lack chemistry. 8. The grandmother is all over the board and distracting. 9. The payment for the roof it seems would have been worked out or more developed. 10 simple scene transitions were annoying.. hair down and hair ticked in and then down in a second of each other. I could go on... This movie had such potential and a great message. The distractions though were too much. Seemed like it was better suited for hallmark