I must say its a good read. The preface made me jump off the bed and order it online. As iv always had a liking for womens writing being my own subject. Regarding editing i would really mention that it could have been much better grammatically. “Girl in white cotton” referring to page 214 - “she shakes her head slowly and places THE IT on the bed”. In another instance page 216 “He says to MEETS his friends”.
Such miniscule errors destroys the whole feel of reading.
