Derbi Mpeti

I’m surprised people dislike this one more than the 3rd, this one is fantastic and has a very good and well written plot/story. Enough obstacles and action, story heart and a great homage to the first. I learn this for screenwriting this has the structure you need to make a good film.

People have forgotten this is only one episode of a 10 episode show. So I will judge it based solely on the one episode and where it is likely to go. So far it is not a bad show and I like John Stamos I’m sure that’s why the most of us have tuned in to it. It has a decent story line that sort of delves from the typical coach redemption story because it is shoved into today’s era, meaning the coach can’t get away with things like calling a girl fat. Which is good to be fair. But all those PC terms and etc.. to much. It feels like they needed to get rid of all of that to actually focus on the storyline for this episode, we will see if this gets spaced out like it should’ve if you really needed to put it in. Where I hope it’s more likely to go is delve into each characters story arc and bring out the heart in the show, which a good show will do. I’d give this show a try if you’re curious nothing memorable to far, but could become a hit if it finds more of its groove and fan base.

This show is okay in the sense of it’s a family show and comforting, very cheesy but if you like that stuff this is the show. It’s bad in the sense of including “Christianity” then deviating from it heavily putting new age teachings throughout. I’ll stick to 90’s black shows. Either put Christianity and be faithful or don’t put it at all it is not cute.

I was very glad Fran got a new show, I did the research to see if it was good before I tuned in and bad reviews all around, only good about it was Fran. This promoted me to look up the show creators and writers, I found out not one of them wrote for a show before, all actors and if they did write it was 1 other thing. No joke! No wonder why this show is failing and that’s to bad, considering all the talented writers still waiting to get a big break. I have yet to watch the episode but after finding that out I have not much to expect.