Please understand, I like shows with clues and supernatural themes... but this show is throwing way too many puzzle pieces at the viewer - it's overwhelming. Your audience is too busy trying to analyze and remember what they are witnessing and how it all fits.
Your audience is trying so hard to establish a storyline that they forget to enjoy the ride.
Too many twists. Simplicity would have been a better sell to the audience.
Some productions make more sense on paper or in a book. This series lost the audience by too much symbolism and not enough storyline.
If you could do it all over? The story needs a constant timeline. The series would have been much better told in real time instead of the constant bouncing from visions to reality.
Worthy effort but I agree with other reviews. Your head will hurt by trying to keep track of the storyline.
You overwhelmed your audience.