Victory V

Spoilers within. I liked the premise but they let cliche high school banality take the lead early on. I truly thought the head popular mean girl was going to bust out with, "Oh. My. God. Becky. Look at her butt. She looks like one of those rap guys girlfriends..." The only interesting high school bit about coming out was so rushed. I liked the idea of an ancient secret warlock society and the monsters are people too storyline. They didn't give it enough time. Tell me more about the intra-monster commando squad and why they're hunting warlock lady? Likewise, it would have been nice to stretch out the demise of the evil queen of Presidio. She was a hag. Overall, the writing was so very so-so...It had so much potential.

Interesting world, great ambience and I liked the diversity in the characters, though the super model of evil was a stretch. My peeve was the incessant stupidity! They have all these magical tools but never seem to think to use the ones they need when they need them. I get that mishaps move a plot forward, but if writers make characters that dumb, they deserve to leave the gene pool. Give your audience some credit. It was entertaining though.