Marlene Cummins

Do not like the ending after being thrilled with the excitement and passion, to finish without knowing what happen in the tunnel and for him to be ripped into pieces. Rewrite the ending into a part 2 with her being kidnapped by the other woman with him desperately finding her and filling her with more exciting passion. Made part 2 with a happy ending and this time more English please. Thank you. Patiently waiting to be blowned away with passion.