Baby Hands

The book started off with a solid plot only to end up being a bad porno. The characters are two dimensional and the authors lack of knowledge with firearms becomes painfully apparent when she calls the muzzle of a firearm a ‘nozzle’ as if our psycotic anti hero is holding a spray bottle. This fetish fueled fantasy left a scowl on my face with the understanding this book quickly abandoned the plot in favor of a creepy and violent psychopath that resembles patrick batemen more than anything else. This is poor even by smut standards and i littlerally threw it in the trash after 100 pages and was amazed that this is a series. If dexter morgan met 365 days this is what you would have. Things I like about this book however are that the plot is very captivating and is a good foundation, even if it was thrust into the background in favor of dark sexual fantasies. If a sexually charged read is what you are after than this book fits the bill I just find the authors utter lack of research on certain aspects annoying. It reads like a dark daydream and is very two dimensional which is not a bad thing for smut, but i feel like this book would be alot more fleshed out if there was more focus on character and plot building. The book however littlerally gave me the ick around the time this committed multiple assault and batteries, a breaking and entering and installed cameras into Ms. greens appartment and proceeded to masturbate to her unaware after being downright fucking creepy for nine chapters.