Allison Stern

It’s really a good story however there were too many episodes. It wasn’t cut tightly. There were too many close up camera shots of the leads fingers rubbing together or long drawn out emotive faces. So much repetitiveness. Could have been 6 episodes. Also the story lines were not resolved. John? Jake? Emma? Where did John get the gun to kill Rose’s father as in the end you hear the shooting of the swim coach. It could have been tight and tense but it meandered. The story would still make a really terrific 2 hour film.