EStory Africa

Massive kudos to the filmmakers and especially the director. Making a movie of this magnitude is not easy! Now, to the meat of it. This series could have been way better. 1. Shorter scenes 2. Less repetitive dialogue 3. Better plot structure If you’ve not seen the first installment, do yourself a favor and watch that first else you’ll give up on this. Dear Nollywood, screaming and good acting have never been synonymous. Never. Many things could have been placed elsewhere. I was confused by Eniola. If she wants to be a better person, why did she want to be governor? That why was never answered. Why not go straight to the cemetery from the airport? If flagellation was a key point, it should have been introduced after she met the catholic priest. He had no reason to be in the film. She was oba. Why was she chasing endorsements? She made a President but couldn’t make herself governor? Try again. Please. The catholic angle would have made for a cryptic clash of voodoo and catholicism. Wasted opportunity. How did she team up with the same Akorede who almost killed her? That hole would land a ship. A hint at something would have helped, maybe a meeting after the bomb went off in her car? The plot twist with Ade was a zero. The scene with Ade and the girl in the cemetery was a poor amateurish set up. Who was the girl and why was she hidden? Took the audience for granted there. Waste of suspense. Who was the maid? Why all those secret looks between her and Ade? So who was sending info to Dapo? I’ll die if you say Ade. I mean. The director also wrote the script and imo, she is not a writer. It might help to engage a team of writers if this show will continue.