Ugh, I desperately want to rewrite the whole thing. Perhaps a little background on who they were stealing from may have explained the "self portrait" or the creepy shrine. A little background on the thiefs would have also helped explain why he wouldn't sleep in what must have been a high end bed, but chose to camp out on the floor. This was just wierd, as soon as the alarm malfunctioned someone would have showed up. I tried to justify it as one mans luxury is another mans prison but I struggled.