Josh Countryman

The story leaves much to be desired. From the characters all the way to the plot. Some characters make no sense, such as the art professor. Characters should be much more than plot devices. Many characters are killed off for no reason than because the plot said so, such as Trooper Jenkins. The assassins knew she bailed, there was no real reason to continue to chase Jenkins other than to just kill him off. Properly trained operatives don't split up like that. Also Farr, her becoming the villain makes no sense. Explain more on how these people got corrupted. The plot also tends to be all over the place. Feeling more like a jigsaw puzzle with the lights off, it hurts seeing how it progresses and how it tries to remain coherent but can't. It needed more thought on it before release.