Peyton N. (Peyton025)

“The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe is about a guy who kills an old man. It starts off with people calling him crazy. Then he kills an old man because he “has the eye of a vulture”!!! And chops him up and puts him in the boards. Then the police came and interrogated him. He admitted that he killed someone because he thought he heard his heartbeat. The reason why I give it a one-star review is its boring. For example, he was talking about him going into the old man’s room for a whole paragraph. There is too much detail and not a lot of action. If I wrote the story I would make everything less descriptive, and I would make the killer eat the old man.