Jd Britton

Terrible script. For example there is a qouted line from the show when some dude says, “I studied on Coricant,” this is a planet not a school. When writing a good story there has to be a plot which is understood. What is the main character’s goal and how does he overcome adversity to achieve it. Yes, we see Boba Fett fight, but in reality the Pike Syndicate stretches across the galaxy of Star Wars; so it looks as if it’s a turf feud instead of an all out war. The fighting does not have a great enough scale to represent the masses of an entire planet. We see a few little punks and their speeder bikes, a gun platform and three dozen fighters when we know that the scale of the Pikes is equivalent to an intergalactic mafia. Instead the Pikes no appear to be the size of a local gang. When talking about the dialogue we can also add that Disney has reused lots of reused sound effects from Episodes 1-6. Fix the plots in your shows Disney and do justice to these characters. Ashoka Tonos character looked fake and if CGI Luke Skywalker can look that good so can she. Great ideas poorly written.