Aziz Tanha

It wasn't bad overall, it just wasn't as strong as I thought. I have noticed some errors in translation and the command that was used in translation was more toward ordering or dispute language. At some point I couldn't understand that Hamid whether was a liberal or Islamic revolutionary activist. To my understanding, at first, he was an Islamic activist who supports the revolution, he wants his wife Masumeh not to put on Hejab showing himself liberal, which is on the contrary to the iranian revolutionary ideology (as we observing now in Iran) After the revolutionary took power from Shah then he became against the revolutionary, so to my understanding there was a contradiction there which was confusing.