THECREATURE OFTHENIGHT

good passionate writing and great character design !!! hello i am a artist and a writer as both i believe this show is great, especially in the character design department !!! in character design theres three major "rules" for a good design; big medium small, shape theory, and colour !!! in these characters they all do it amazingly !!! i love Mae's and Osha's design the most, their hair is so pretty too !!! On writing department, its pretty good; theres conflict, stakes etc.. and most importantly mysteries !!! your always asking yourself what will happen next. And most importantly; passion, you can just feel that the writers really wanted to make this. although the negatives are; sometimes it feels a bit fan-fictiony, and sometimes the dialogue is slightly dumming it down. however for most part the dialgogue is good. also on a side note i like how they use the same scene transitions effects as the og starwars had !!!

I walked out in the first 10 minutes of it (it was actually the first 5 but felt like 10) because I spotted some red flags with the writing ; 1; No opening hook and 2; THEY HAD A SCENE OF HIM GETTING OUT OF BED! Bro there’s a reason they don’t do that, one unwritten rule of writing is that ; if it’s boring and slows down the pacing of a story; cut it it from the script! 3; in the cinema there were a bunch of crusty dinosaurs watching it (boomers, actually if there were dinosaurs it would’ve been entertaining) Anyways I (and my dad) walked out, and explored the nearby area whilst waiting for my family, anyways half way through my brother walked out too, normally I wouldn’t feel bad for him but this is the first time I did, he said that it was just as boring as the first 5 minutes and there was no pacing. IF YOU LIKE GOOD MOVIES; DONT WATCH IT!!! They were just trying to bank on Anthony Hopkins doing a good job performing lt, so they spent all the budget on him and none on the writers.