Trash
This "script" is terrible, I'm trying to read a book not get a movie pitched at me by distracting narrating "we" comments like I have a say in how this should sound. References other marvel series instead of building a back story like you do in a book...
But all of that is taste, my biggest problem was he spoiled his own character reveal!
In page 114 hardcover version (because they didn't have a paperback and I can see why now. )
He listed a "mysterious hulking figure" in a mask as the name of a possibly dead character from the last book!!!
Why would you do that because it had to be on purpose since it was on the hard cover version.
This isn't even good enough to be a Christmas special cartoon adapted script.