Ahmed

I felt that English was spoken quite unnecessarily throughout this film. You should think about the audience and plus it felt cringe rather than "cool". I felt it was a good attempt at making something unique in Pakistan, which is still stuck in cringe romcom genre. I believe that the writing could have been better, and that some of the scenes were completely absurd such as, when the two armies are fighting, Laqqas army has guns but despite that they decided to fight at close distance. Additionaly, the end was confusing(the hamza abbasi bit) Overall, kudos for trying out something different , but there is a big room for improvement.