Okay but...
Alternates between broadbrush narrative and hyper detail, which feels strange.
Seems like JR is the only human with intelligence. Everyone else is a clown unless they're a military police superstar. In my own personal experience with a good number of MPs, I didn't meet any with more than very basic abilities and sense.
The lassie gets hot and dirty with JR within just a couple of days, but by the end it turns out she was already in a relationship with her colleague and rides into the sunset with him instead of JR.
The end is a bit anticlimactic. Shoot the villain from far distance, chase the guy in a van with a helicopter and evaporate him in an explosion. Meh...
The single most annoying thing throughout the book (seems like every other sentence) is that spoken phrases end with "right?" from multiple speakers. Was that way of talking so prevalent in the early 90s? I don't remember it like that. I hope later books by Child don't use this style, right? Lazy writing, proofreading and editing.