Ralph

I teach storytelling in some of my workshops and what I saw is an incomplete story. No real ending. You take people on a semi-emotional roller coaster that I really thought was going to give me a Fargo like experience only to have the end peter out into nothingness with no real conclusion. No real conflict and resolve that satisfies the need of a story. This could have been much, much better. If you expect an audience to invest their time, please give them something more complete in return. I thought the style, setting, feel, and characters were great and production value was there throughout but it left me feeling empty as in: "That's it? That's what I'm left with". As though the writers ran out of ideas beyond their basic premise.