Sarah Patteson

I am only 30 pages in and don’t think I can continue reading. The writing is terrible. She will write a whole paragraph and then spend the next paragraph explaining why she just wrote that paragraph. Or paraphrase an entire paragraph into 4 words at the end. Or write 2 paragraphs about her experience and then say her experience isn’t the point but she wanted to add it anyway. I don’t care! If you want it in the book write it and leave it. It is like she is second guessing everything she says. I can’t. I have the second star because the content is good and in my opinion true. Just organized and written in the most frustrating fashion imaginable.