OurCityRandom

Simply a wonderful story that makes me want to know more. I will say, if I had to tweak one little thing it would be the severe lack of Laser Dinosaurs. Eliot's journey will stick with me for a long time and I have to say I am already feeling that pang that comes with the end of a story. The only thing missing for me was the appearance of Laser Dinosaurs shooting at space aliens from space. Think about how much more impactful Fountainhead's journey would have been if he had ridden a Laser Dinosaur into battle against a league of aliens hellbent on destroying our home planet. The story stands on its own so I understand if there aren't any movements to add Laser Dinosaurs into The Elliot Trilogy. 10/10

Great book, Just one small suggestion: I think the book could be improved tenfold with the addition of Laser Dinosaurs. Don't get me wrong—it's a classic by itself, but imagine how much better it would be if a laser dinosaur popped up and started taking out some space aliens with its epic laser blasters. I understand if the author never fixes this but I hope for their next book they consider the addition of Laser Dinosaurs. Hope this helps

Definitely a good read, the only thing I could criticize is the lack of Laser Dinosaurs. The author should release a version with some giant carnivorous lizards with laser biometrics or something. Pretty awesome otherwise.