Helen Tinson

helentinson 22 h Enjoying the plot so far HOWEVER....who on earth did the proof reading....SO MANY errors.....p20 line1 , p32 line 16 (bought not brought), p 44 line 16 ( a few extra of !), P84 line 7 ( turned away, not turned way), p110 (both at the same "time" ?), p183 (jump off of!!), P222 line 22 ( talk TO an officer), p259 line 13 ("Ineed to try get and get closure"). It seems shocking that so many errors have been overlooked and allowed to go to print. Spoils the otherwise great writing.