It’s not bad, but it could be so much better. They basically just have him go somewhere, fight someone/thing, and go home. It makes him seem like such a brute instead of a tactical fighter. Like when he went to steal the speeders before hijacking the train. He was still weak and not getting much water, so he had no business going into the bar and fighting 3 thugs. He should have taken a stealth approach there and just stolen the speeders without a fight.
Also, those teenage street youths are weird and don’t really make sense. They said they didn’t even have enough wages for water, and now don’t work at all and just barely get by off of stealing. Then they hop on their colorful expensive looking speeders, when hardly anyone else can even afford a regular speeder. Are they just rich brats?